Saturday, September 10, 2011

Quinn's Paragraph

Allie shivered under her jacket. It was too cold. But she knew that she couldn't go back inside, she just couldn't.Not when they knew what she had done. How could she have been so stupid? It was obvious that Dan liked her more than Jade, but she was her best friend! She was the one to kiss him first, but all they'll ever see are two cheating scumbags. They door to the cabin opened behind her. She turned round. Oh God, but he was beautiful, Allie though as Dan slipped through the doorway and sat down next to her.

2 comments:

  1. Beautifully written Gepard!
    Maybe Jade kissed Dan 1st. But what does it matter if Dan loves Allie more? Love is love. Is Dan going out with JAde? If he does not love her he should let her go. Does she even deserve him?
    I don't think any real friends they have will concider Allie and Dan cheating scumbags. Perhaps Jade is.

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  2. I've had my 2nd part of the story up for a while now. I hope you can read it and I hope you enjoy it.
    :D

    http://grandconvergence.blogspot.com/2011/09/lost-purple-rose.html

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